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Storm brewing on lake Simcoe Oil on Canvas 12 x24 |
This is from a photo I took in September of 2010. It has gone through many changes, in the first iteration I concentrated on painting a very dramatic sky, and liked the effect, but sensed something was wrong, and after listening to the advice of other artists (a rare thing for me!) I realized the truth of what they said, the eye couldn't settle "make it a painting of boats on a lake or make it a painting of a stormy sky"
So I reworked the sky which has brightened up the boats and made them more important.
A lesson learned listen to your eyes (and other artists).
your comments would be appreciated
John
Sorry John, but my eye is still drawn to the sky which is lovely and dramatic . I bet in the photo you took the photo mainly because of the sky.
ReplyDeleteThe boats are good as well and I especially like the reflections in the water. The boats and especially the tallest one ,lead your eye to the sky, so great composition.